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Monster

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Monster
Monsters. Under the bed, in the closet, hiding in the shadows of the night. Whispering, skittering, and slithering through the dark. Watch all around you, light your way for you, don't know what you'll find. Follow your path; beware of lies for they are a monster that never dies. Claws raking across furniture, the sharpening of weapons. Soft pad falls of silent steps never to be truly heard. Glowing eyes appear in the night, then quickly whisk away. The eerie sound in the room? Breathing? The monsters? Or yours? Another person in the house? Your reflection? Or a ghost? The stars and moon are hidden. By clouds? Or something much more near? Is that the loading of guns and sharpening of knives, the mysterious sounds you hear?
The most dangerous monster lives within us all and should be greatly feared. It causes sticks to become stakes, rain to become acid, shadows to become pits. Yes, the greatest monster of all is the human imagination.
I am so confused right now. I was typing this up and in the second to last sentence, the part 'shadows to become pits'? In the original writing, for some reason I wrote 'knives to become earrings.'
What in the world was I thinking?
This was originally written 8-30-11.
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LilSis7's avatar
Well, if this were English class and we were discussing technique I would probably say that I admired your word choice, use of unique adjectives/adverbs that really paint a picture in your mind. I also liked the creative ending. However, from the more abstract view (which is honestly more important to me) is the explaining the truth of the human thought. You clearly describe the danger of the monsters and the fear that they inspire. Then, you go on to say that it isn't the monsters we should fear, but ourselves for we are the ones who allow them to exist. I also liked how it made you think. :) There's my (long) opinion.